[SUBMISSION] Toxic Afrit

Name: Toxic Afrit
Difficulty: Hard
Connection: Uses ArchonComet from ArchonOfHell actor
Summon: ToxicAfrit
Melee: No
Distance: Projectile
Type: Demon
Brightmaps: No
GLDefs: No
ACS: No
Submitted: Ganbare-Lucifer
Decorate: Nanami, Ghastly_dragon, mattbratt11
Sounds: Id Software
Sprites: Id Software
Sprite Edit: Espi, Ebola, mattbratt11 (Recolor)
Idea Base: Afrit from Realm667

Description:
You thought the Afrit was a pain in your bottom? Think again. Here comes its cousin the Toxic Afrit, using poisonous projectiles to make your time even worse.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1L9qEh_J_azJ1SJ1FHMGP0VvEoXuQqZrf/view?usp=drive_link

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DeVloek wrote:

this doesn't start, error message:

Code:

Script error, "ToxicAfrit.pk3:decorate" line 1: Parent type 'DoomAfrit' not found in ToxicAfrit Execution could not continue. 1 errors while parsing DECORATE scripts

 

Updated

It does work without errors now.

Nice monster, I like the look and the warping satellites, however I have a few suggestions:

The green fire translation is too much, the fire sprites have lost all detail and are just plain green which doesn't look good imho.
also the fire is kinda useless, in my test map the monster only spawned the fire directly under it, and it doesn't spread so the attack is basically harmless, the only purpose I can see is blocking the player's way, or maybe triggering infights 
Would be nice if the fire spreads out towards the player or something like that, maybe as a floorhugger projectile? Doesn't have to be a fast one, just some movement would be nice so the player has to be more aware around the monster.

I noticed the meteor impact doesn't seem to have much of an impact if you know what i mean... I mean the damage is absolutely deadly, but the explosion effect is kinda lacking, maybe make it explode into a toxic cloud that slowly dissipates or something like that? Or the stationary fire from the other attack

Poison damage over time doesn't seem to work, if that's even intended? I forgot how to use it in decorate so I'm not sure.

Last thing, the monster can clip into ceilings from the shoulders upwards. increasing height by 10 or 15 should do the trick.

 

To be brutally honest, I don't find this monster interesting. It's basically a green Afrit with the same kind of attacks, but more powerful, and green. There's nothing really toxic about it, both visually and technically.

I would make a toxic cloud of poison hover around its waste area to fit the theme, cut out the fire stuff, and maybe go for a more dirty khaki green, or bright lime green colour, rather than basic green. this would emphasise the toxic or poisonous theme.

Basically everything should be remade from the ground up., and seeing the lack of quality control put into your other submissions, I don't think this could happen any time soon.
Closing this.